Saying Goodbye

Even a year ago, I never would have believed I could fall out of love with Patrick.

We met on a summer night when I was only 13 and waiting for something to happen, already longing to get up in the middle of the night and just turn the doorknob and start walking: disappear one night and show up a few years later under a different name and a Broadway marquee.

Patrick was the perfect man, or what at 13 I expected the perfect man to be like: handsome, melancholy, sensitive, gifted, passionate. We grew together. We shared the same friends. I can't say I knew everything about him, but I knew him so well that there were things I knew about him that he didn't know about himself.

We were together for 16 years and even until last year I was as much in love with him as ever.

I had a vacation in Phoenix with my parents over the New Year, and when I got back, it just wasn't the same.

There was no reason. He did nothing wrong. Perhaps I'd just come to know him too well; perhaps  I couldn't think of any more secrets of his that I wanted to discover.  Perhaps I'd outgrown his melancholy. I started to stay away and when I did try to spend time with him, I found myself slack, unmotivated, even faintly repulsed. I could never stay long.

Clearly I was the one who grew away. Patrick has not changed. I know now that he never will. He will always be glad to see me - and in truth, when he crosses my mind, it's with a sweetness and a true affection.  I can imagine that someday, in months or years, I'll have a sudden urge and meet him again and find myself amazed to think I let things drift so long. I could fall in love with Patrick again. After all, he's handsome, melancholy, sensitive, gifted and passionate.

But for now, I have  Jonathan, who has eyes like lightning, and Asher, who's so unpredictable, and Vova, who's no good but is a genius, and Michael, who's beautiful but weak. None of them will stay forever; none will be the love of my writing life. That will always be Patrick - no matter how long we're apart.

Introducing Asher

   ASHER LEVINE believes in the Messiah. Not an idealistic impostor who was born of a virgin 2000 years ago, but a great politician who could come at any time. And Asher believes his job is to make the path smooth, the crooked places straight. He will be the Messiah’s mentor, guide and discoverer. He is Britain’s secular prophet. For years he sees Jonathan as his Messiah, with his weak-minded younger cousin Zachariah as his herald, but when Jonathan dies he wants to create a replacement.

   Asher’s creative in bed and at work – and that’s about it. He doesn’t waste imagination on anything else, like conversation or events or leisure. He pours all his energy into his legacy, and views love as a distraction. Asher is completely decorous in public life, but he is an epicure – he loves exquisite food and exquisite women, but only if they belong to him. He has a horror of fathering a bastard, which he would see as weakening his line.

   After the tragedy of his first wife’s and unborn child’s death in his late 20s, Asher is determined to be in control of every situation and person in his life, and this resolution will prove his downfall.

Introducing Jonathan

JONATHAN LEVINE loves women, fashion, the intricacies of politics, and anything retro. He successfully combines street-wise confidence with idealism and a natty pencil moustache. Jonathan is dyslexic but makes up for it with a remarkable memory and a quick tongue. He is a believer with nothing to believe in. His posh political family is his blessing and his curse: Uncle Asher, the Home Secretary, made a good job of his education, training and style, but Jonathan can’t give him the unquestioning loyalty he demands.

   Louche, generous and elegant, Jonathan is irresistible to women – and they are irresistible to him. Borderline promiscuous, Jonathan’s relationships never last long. Why let anyone in when she’d only get hurt?

   Because Jonathan is going to die young. He’ll be 34 when his number is up. Pity he meets the love of his life when he is 33.

Happy Shiny Fictional People

One of my greatest struggles as a writer is overexcitement and undercommitment. Let me explain:

-Patrick was my first love. Every once in a while I think, I'll spend some time with Patrick. I'll empathize with him for a little while, I'll enjoy his beauty, I'll give him a few new adverbs and sharpen his motivation. I'll summarize his story in a way that makes everyone want to read it.
-The moment passes.

-I'll read a blog about how London's West End is currently full of jukebox musicals and I feel a sudden wild passion to create something new, to be backstage, to make something magnificent and start a theatrical renaissance.
-I get discouraged by how hard it is to break into theatrical writing. The moment passes.

-I listen to the 'soundtrack' for my WIP on the walk home. The songs sound like characters speaking to me. I feel every emotion that I want to see poured out on my pages. I'm ready to fire up the laptop the moment I walk in the door.
-Dinner, tidying the kitchen, putting in a load of laundry, watching an episode of Glee, phoning Mom, a little reading, bed.

-I read over my 'current projects' list. Five of them appeal to me and I'm excited to see where the stories and characters are going to go.
-Overwhelmed. Choose none of them.

There's a danger of magpieing - getting distracted by the latest shiny story idea but lacking the dedication to sit down with it for an hour. I want to be the Olympic swimmer of writing, constantly honing my craft, constantly using those muscles. What I seem to be instead is the retired gardener of writing, potting around in my mind-shed, which is like a mind-palace but smaller and underfurnished because I haven't given it the time and materials to achieve magnificence.

And that's just one writing struggle. Sometime when I'm feeling ambitious I'll have to write about plotting.

Welcome

Hemingway said you should start a story by writing the truest thing you know.

I think you have no business starting a story without a killer first line.

Now that that's over with, welcome to the blog.